Stop Making Sense #100
Yes, so far this sounds great. I really can't wait to listen to the full/complete version.
Stunning job on the percussion/drums, and you've left plenty of space for more instruments/melodies (if you decide to add more)
Very inspiring track!
5/5
Hehe thanks for the kind review, and yeah, i can add a lot more to it, although i don't knów if i should.
The thing i like the most about this song that it's so clean and soft, so empty in a subtle way but still sounds rather complete.
Working on other projects now, but as soon as i have the time i'll finish this one.
Unfinished Business (demo)
Yeah_awesome so far, love the bass, short stabs of brass and some piano here and there could be perfect for this!
Thanks! still alot of work to be done! Cya
Departing Chaos
Yeah, the guitar sound is stunning. This is a perfect fade-in / fade-out intro track.
Really good.
Thanks very much. Glad you like it!
Undergeneration
Cool_it just gets better and better as it progresses. Imo, it'll be appropriate for a scene/theme where the time is running out...
I think you're right. I should include this in the description.
Simniloquy
Very nice Kreese!_Allthough I'm not a fan of that robot/voice effect thing, I think you made a good song here . Break/change at 01:15 is awesome, actually my favourite part of the track. I just can't help to wonder what it would sound like if you used your real voice , in particular for the verses. The robo-effect/ voice would sound so much better if you only used it in the chorus'es. Less is more, but thats only my opinion.
Keep it up!
Thanks Tokolos! I used a vocoder for the vocals because I can't sing, as much as I wish I could. I might just try it though on the verses, maybe my voice won't sound as bad as I think it will. Thank you so much for taking the time to listen and review!
One More Day
Wow, what a great peice of music! I love everything the way it is, it's just that I wish the guitar sounded more real, but nevermind that, Good work man, let me know when you release the next version.
5/5
honestly, my hope is to have someone record a guitar track for me. That would be so fucking sick!!! especially if they added all those touches that I couldn't. Especially strumming. I mean I could do it with FL, but it sounds bad so I kept it relatively simple. Thanks for the review man. I will definitely keep you updated! Especially if I can get that live guitar on it! xp. I get excited just thinking about it!
Andromeda .:SB:
Great drums/beats_again
If youre worried about the other instruments, well, don't they sound good. You could maybe consider a more melodic bassline to support the beat, esp the 1st part of the track. Good work !
5/5
Thanks Toko. Your input means alot to me, and I'll def. try for a more melodic bassline now. Cheers ;)
Golden Age
Wow_this is such a huge contrast from the previous version, the intro / fade-in is a nice touch. I like the fact that there's more of a conversation between the different instruments now. Some of the low end stuff you can try to clarify a bit more...maybe use less notes/chords on the bassy stuff 2 bring out the higher melodies/notes more. Send all the low end bass stuff to it's own fx channel and center them in the mix. Then all the cool panning effects you added will stand out more.
This track is becoming somewhat of a journey...
I'm keen to hear the next version too though, you should make a series, I 'd love to add one too!
plz don't delete them ( other versions ) I want to listen to the 1st one again and it's gone.
I'll repost it if i have it. i probably do. i'll totally post. but the guy under you thought i shouldn't keep older versions. so i deleted them. i'll bring em back up.
for the series, it'll be a collab. i'll make my own "Journey" and ,you make your own path, but our projects, never intertwine. so i'll give you the basic 1st version guitar, and you can take it from there. it'll evolve into two totally different songs sounding strangely similar. From now we'll name it "The Journey of _______ 1,2,3 Etc. "(Either me or you depending on who made it.)
i'll explain this better in a PM.
My Brains
Love your attention to the beats/drums elie. All the little subtle touches are great.
Maybe it could have gone on a little longer... got more chaotic? heheh :D
5/5
Hello and thank you! I finished this in 3-5 hours and yes, it could be longer and more chaotic, but i was too tired to do anything and didn't improve it later because i'm just too lazy! :D I'm glad you liked it!
--It'sa me, ET!--
Meins
Great track guilmonx_when it picked up I was surprised, didnt expect that ! heheh
But personally I prefer the chilled out hip hop start, but all in all, all the parts complement each other nicely!
5/5
Do you, or anyone else, think that there should be more in the beginning? Its hard to make two melodies. I had a second melody for the start but it threw the flow off a bit too much. The part that took its place is that strange chime thing in the background.
South Africa
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